Really interesting plot you have going here. While we're given not much on any of the main characters, the plot is really easy to follow and understand whats going on. This reminds me alot of Dead Space and Aliens the movie. In fact, this is playing so far exactly how Dead Space starts off, though of course thats not a bad thing. Lots of dark music and the way you detailed the backgrounds gave this a real dark feel to the movie! So I do see some plot developement in progress and I'm excited to see part 2! Other then the plot, animation was pretty good. Not the best of course, but with voice acting, sound effects and the obvious work and length of this movie shows. I hope you continue to strive for improvement in episode 2 and I'll be gladly waiting!
Oi Golfinho, suas animaÃ§Ãµes sÃ£o bro extemamente estranho. Embora, para ser honesto, eles sÃ£o sempre de qualidade superior e lisa. Eu realmente me pergunto o que vocÃª estÃ¡ imaginando como vocÃª tirar essa coisa ridÃ-cula. Embora este seja ART para vocÃª, para qualquer que seja haha.
I love you, rain.
The most genius part of this whole thing was when that guy tried to lock him up from the back, and damn Steven Sagal just broke out of it while decapitating the guys arms. That sir, was truly badass.
Jokes were forced though this shit was creepy to watch lol. Stereotyping the bronies are always a good thing to do. If they love the show so much, they probably sneaked peak a look at pony porn.
As much as I want to give 'CRITICISM", this obviously will not have it!
I am confused by Newgrounds artists now.
This was actually really interesting to watch. The plot was well..weird? Though everything else I found pretty much cool. Though perhaps you should have done a much solid plot because he went from loving a creeper, to drowning, to being hanged up on a tree and so on. Really liked the colors as well! To be honest, I liked the idea of you using minecraft photo's for the set. Really adds in the feel that it is minecraft.
The plot is pretty awful so I was kinda hesitant to post it on Newgrounds, but glad that didn't stop you from enjoying the animation. Much thanks! :D
I wish I understood ANYTHING that those rats said. Should have added subtitles. I really don't know what else to say..other then this felt really flat to me. In a 2-d perspective way. Perhaps you were aiming for that, but that's just my perspective.
Your animating skills obviously show that you do know what you are doing. Though the story SUCKED. I didn't find this amusing at all. I was hoping for a kind of parody maybe since the title says Monk Payne. Though, you sort of kind of wasted your time adding so much detail to all that you just drawn just to show a coincidence at the end with the game? I'm giving this a high rating due to the fact you can animate. You just decided to not give this enough soul for a story line I guess.
Thanks for the feedback! I started animating without any plans on where this was headed to. So I guess that's why people hated it so much, though I still find the joke I made funny (haha). I'll try to make up for my lack of storytelling skillz next time.
I found this amazingly amazing. And very quite funny. Though, I never watch naruto but god damn, for some reason it just hit me, you added a naruto reference. While I didn't enjoy to find that out, the way you used it was hilarious. I just found myself laughing at Umbreon's dead corpse.
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